Six Feet Under Ringtone

Andy has always managed the situation by doing nothing serious had happened. While others wept and mourned the death of their loved ones, Andy has always been the strange child who has never shed a tear. He was always being told by his father to "chin up" and never look back. Even when he was four his father had taught him about death. Explaining how it all eventually stop working. Andy did not understand what his father tried to tell him, but he knew it was a serious conversation. Then he just stood up and waved to his father. Now it seems that Andy left behind things his father told him.
We do not know what Andy was thinking that night in his room when all his friends were Sadie Hawking have a great time. This was the moment when Andy wanted to be excluded from the world. To watch the full moon and think about Palma. If he could just close your eyes, perhaps Palma seems. He tried as hard as he could think of her. He wanted her to descend from the sky and pull it into a kiss. It would be beautiful in her white dress and golden halo above his animated blonde hair butter. Her big green eyes boring into his heart as they shook hands with others.
He just wanted to caress and touch for the first time. He wanted his perfume jam and bathe in its sweetness. None of that seemed to come.
Tears gradually out of his eyes. And soon turned into a flood. His eyes were a river with its rising waters. It took a little frame of a sepia image of Palma on a horse. His parents had taken the title on an afternoon early fall. The day was orange and crisp as the leaves fell from the sky. That was the day he gave his wrist Palma football. It meant a lot to him is that his father gave him when he was seven. This bracelet has been extended to six feet under with Palma. All the memories do not seem to come back to him. They were busy trying to escape.
The theme of Jurassic Park to ring his mobile phone. Savannah is the signature tone of the text. He looked at the clock radio and saw that it was 12:01. Curious, he went to his bed and took the phone. He was not prepared for what he saw on the display screen.
Andy, I'm sorry, I can not handle this. I want to see Palma again. Do not feel sad or cry when I left. Just remember me for who I am. I just want you to know that I love you.
The soil of a man's heart is stony
A man grows what he can, and it tends

Andy was still reading the text again and again. When the words finally sunk in, his eyes rolled back in his head and he fell backward onto his bed.

I had a feeling of nostalgia reading the latest piece: "The soil of a man's heart is stony. A man grows what he can, and it tends. "

You can talk about recalling the words of Andy Pet Semetary by Stephen King.

I am a little confused, but ... Andy Palma crying, wanting to hold her and bathe in its (?!?)... marmalade fragrance, but is Savannah ... and she says she loves .... This kind some love triangle ... or am I missing something?

simple suggestions:
"Acting like nothing happened"
"It meant a lot to him since his father gave"
"They were too busy trying to escape"
"Signature text" signature is pointless
Who texts of Stephen King cites as a suicide note?

Not bad, keep it. Maybe give examples of your hero is stoic. See, do not say

six out of ten.

Well first of all is the devil is Palma? It took me until the end of the passage suggests that it was his ex.

It is rather a rapid pace and generally just weird for me.

Thats just my opinion. Hope this helps.