Resume Help ... How does this sound and what or how can I do better? I am very goal oriented and can meet a given deadline. I'm articulate and things are in order. I have good phone etiquette and communication. I am very proficient in Microsoft Office, particularly Word and Excel. My typing speed is 40 words per minute and I am excellent at the time of filing and data entry. I love working with people but I can not accomplish a given task independently. I managed a lot of situations and tasks.
2004/2006 - Housing Domestic Violence - Supervisor Customer
aec answer the phone, hotline crisis, helping battered / abused women
aec Emergency
aec Deposition
aec Data entry
aec Counseling
aec Inventory
aec The organization of staff and client events
aec Supervise and advise customers up to 12 residents and their children
Help aec Search for other clients - Health Services - Housing assistance - financial assistance - Medical Service - Clothing - legal assistance
aec customers supported by Ccas Court, the legal debate, and helped with the paper work
Too many "I" haves first put in your goal, get a job in the field of blah blah blah where I can use my skills blah blah blah. You do not need to write to express, communicate well and meet deadlines. Impress your interviewer by showing these things.
In the first paragraph, you should not start every sentence with "I"
As an HR professional, it does not pass my "So What" test. It gives your opinion of yourself, but do not provide quantifiable results. For example, the staff of the organization and client events do not talk much. Explain briefly what you have organized and how it has benefited from the organization. Also, your first paragraph is not in the format of a resume.
Posted on March 23, 2010.